User:CoulsonT/Solarization (physics)/Cunning8 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(CoulsonT)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CoulsonT/sandbox?action=edit
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * (Article shows revisions as the current version has users additions)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Solarization_(physics)&diff=prev&oldid=1146614424

Lead
The lead section does not reflect the added content, however the addition is an example and does not need to be reflected in the lead. The lead section is well detailed and needs a reference added to it.

Content
The content added in the examples section is relevant to the topic and has a reference cited. The reference is not though. There may be available places to link to other Wikipedia articles.

The added content is neutral in tone and informative. It does not have any opinions or anything attempting to persuade the reader.

Sources and References
The addition to the article added the only source to it. The source is not linked by appears to be from a reliable source. Once the link is fixed it should be a good addition to the references.

The additions to the article will improve the quality of it and give the article its first source citation. The main addition of an example is useful to the reader and tone neutral. It can be improved by adding links to other Wikipedia articles.

Other suggested editions are possibly adding a line to the lead, and adding a reference to the lead section where possible.