User:Coultere3/Métis/SprinterMLS Peer Review

General info
Coultere3
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Coultere3/Métis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Métis

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * clarity in writing and sentence structure, especially with using pronouns; make sure it's clear what the pronoun refers to
 * check for possible more current sources than early 2000's
 * add more detail about gender roles, not just subsistence wise - child care or money provider for example
 * good ideas and good sources with appropriate links
 * content added is beneficial to the current article