User:CoumbaS/Omar Ba/Gabbypace Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:CoumbaS/Omar Ba/Bibliography
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Evaluate the drafted changes
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Strong outline, I think you have a great idea for where this article is heading. Though early I would say make sure to add images and make sure it’s something you would like to read aswell.