User:Courtney3502/Mitchell Lake (San Antonio)/Jaylenreed Peer Review

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(Courtney3502)


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 * Mitchell Lake (San Antonio)
 * Mitchell Lake (San Antonio)

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You did a great job on the history section. I thought it was very interesting.

I would recommend trying to find more sources, making sure to add spaces between commas in a list, and maybe a section on recreation or something else to add more info. I would also move the sentence about birdwatching to the wildlife section since it seems more fitting there.