User:CowboyThor1712/Söre Popitz/Savannah Leach Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

CowboyThor1712


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CowboyThor1712/S%C3%B6re_Popitz?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CowboyThor1712/S%C3%B6re_Popitz?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
The introduction of Popitz's provides a brief statement of who they are and what they are known for. The article main purpose to identify Popitz a German graphic designer who studied during the Bauhaus Era and provides information about the artist. The information about the artist is concise and not overly detailed, it provides Popitz's early interest in arts and her educational upbringing. It mentions historic art period that influences Popitz's work such as WWII and how most her work was lost during WWII. The article has additional links of location, historic events, and art movements, all are important information to inform the viewer of influences of Popitz's career. The information has few reference to provide information about her early life and artwork. The article is well written with sources and is neutral to the viewer, the tone is consistent from the start and end of the article.