User:Cpapke/Elena Savelyeva/Conra278 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (Brekk184)
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Brekk184/sandbox

Lead evaluation
Have not read new Lead as it is not added to Brekk184/sandbox. New content has been reviewed only.

Content evaluation
Only content from 2012 is on the old Wikipedia article; The content added was from the last two years, so it is relevant and up-to-date. Content about the actual rules of Olympic Boxing is added to the article. These rules may not be needed/explained in depth if there is a current Wikipedia article that is about Olympic Boxing that can be linked to the article.

Tone and balance evaluation
The under-representation of women in boxing in Russia is acknowledged in the new content. It does not seem to be heavily biased but tone is too casual sometimes. Some parts of her Early Life seem like they need to be edited in a way that makes the article more like an informative article rather than an essay (there's unneeded sentences such as: " Elena Savelyeva wasn’t a boxer her entire life.")

Sources and references evaluation
Sources are good. Links work.

Organization evaluation
I'm guessing some parts of the new content in the sandbox are just bullet points/ideas of what are to be added to the article. Bullet points in the section 'Women's Boxing In Russia' seem to be in need of editing to further concise and organize content. Sections of the entire new content are good and are a huge improvement compared to the original articles single paragraph article.

Images and media evaluation
No new media.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * How can the content added be improved?

Overall evaluation
New content is a huge improvement compared to the old Wiki article. The background information of Women Boxing In Russia is a good addition to the article. Parts of the new content seem like they are simply ideas and are meant to be added to the article in a different way rather than how they are presented in the sandbox. Olympic Boxing Rules may not need to added to the article if there is a previous Wiki page that has the same information(?).