User:Cpedrego/Yamato nadeshiko/Ekarck Peer Review

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In the first paragraph under, "Article body" I think it might be beneficial to provide some context/examples of what nationalistic connotations the word Yamato has.

I think that these sentences are a good explanation of the meaning of nadeshiko: t'he word nadeshiko refers to Dianthus superbus'', a frilled pink carnation. The word nadeshiko (撫子) also means beloved or dear child (lit. "child being petted"). The combination of these two meanings indicates a flower of the Japanese nation, that is, a standard of female beauty that is uniquely Japanese. (add citation)'''

I think the second paragraph under the article body section is written in a different way than the rest of your article if that makes sense, the language is a bit distracting.

I liked how you explained the context in modern media that yamato nadeshiko is used.

I think that this section could use some rewording for clarity, and maybe an example: 'The yamato nadeshiko'' character type is often portrayed in anime. Attractive due to having a more mature personality than the other characters, she is often slightly older, sometimes even represented as a teacher or a mothers. Their appeal lies in their sexual maturity and traditional Japanese virtues of a caring yet subservient nature'''

Samurai Blue - I think that it could be beneficial to add a wikipedia link to a page about this or explain what this is referring to, is this the term for the women's soccer team?

If you have information on this, it might be interesting to talk about the term yamato nadeshiko and the women's soccer team and if this nickname has had an influence on the use of the term, changed the meaning of the term, or explain more why this is important to be apart of the article for yamato nadeshiko.