User:Cplamm15/Prostaglandin E2 receptor/Beanorton Peer Review

General info
Cplamm15
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Prostaglandin_E2_receptor&action=history
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Prostaglandin_E2_receptor&action=edit

Evaluate the drafted changes
The student added more detailed information on the specific topic, prostaglandin E2 receptors, and their effects. The information added was concise but still descriptive, well-organized, and neutral. Personally, I would add more punctuation marks, such as commas, at certain points to promote the flow of information but I think that depends on personal writing style. The additions accurately reflect the sources cited and the sources come from reputable outlets, for example the American Heart Association. Even though the sources are not extremely current, they are from 2011 and 2012, this topic is not abundantly studied so there are not a vast amount of sources available.