User:Cquill/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Swimming (sport)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I love this sport and I think its so important that everyone learns how to swim at some point.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

leading section

I thought the leading section was very concise and well written. However, I think the leading section went into too much detail when it spoke about swim suits and swim related injuries. I think the content in the article was very relevant but I think they should've gone into more detail when explaining the different strokes. Thankfully the article did provide links to wiki pages that were dedicated to each stroke. I also wish that this article explained more about diving because thats such a crucial skill in the sport. This sport is very uncontroversial so the overall tone of the article was quite neutral. The wiki article was very well sourced and had over 50 citations listed. I also wish this article included more photos and videos because it would've added a lot to the article because people would be able to learn how to swim.