User:Creek3/Rum Millet/Alexschmidt711 Peer Review

Your facts are all in order and I think you picked good topics to add to the article. While a reader can figure out that Armenians were a separate millet, mentioning such would not be unwarranted, although the mention would probably fit better after "This community became a basic form of social organization and source of identity for all the ethnic groups inside it and most people began to identify themselves simply as "Christians"". Also, "seperate" is spelled "separate," "Arminians" presumably should be "Armenians," and maybe you should cite your addition mentioning how they were a separate millet by reusing the citation you used later.

There are some spelling errors in the final paragraph as well, so you should run the section through a spell checker before publishing. Also, "This bias towards the Orthodox worked...It worked to make..." is somewhat repetitive and could be made into one sentence as "This bias towards the Orthodox worked...and to make..." Despite this, adding this section does address an important omission, namely how Orthodox Christians were treated differently than Catholics.