User:Crf009/Angelshark/Ogs004 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Crf009


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Crf009/Angelshark?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Angelshark
 * Angelshark

Evaluate the drafted changes
PEER REVIEW: It looks like you have a good outline going, but not much detailed information has been added. The actual article seems like it has potential to build upon, so I am interested in what information you add to it. Consider copying a piece of the original article to your sandbox, and build upon that first. I did not see any references cited, or any other details besides the outline titles, but make sure the sources are reliable and provide ample information. Overall interested in what changes you make, and this is a good start to editing your article.