User:Crichm3/Rhim gazelle/Abihoover Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Crichm3


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Crichm3/Rhim_gazelle?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rhim gazelle

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article provides a lot of good information on the Rhim gazelle and the new information regarding heterothermy is precisely worded making it easy to understand. The article may benefit by adding a new section that better fits the additional information about adaptations for a desert environment instead of adding it to the "Distribution and Habitat" section. This new section would allow readers to better understand how Rhim gazelle survive in their habitat and allows for more contributions about the topic to be added later. This proposed addition of a new section after the "Distribution and Habitat" section is important because it will help the flow of the article to be maintained. Currently, the new information added to the "Distribution and Habitat" section does not seem to fit the best and convolutes the topic being focused on in that section. Looking at the Wikipedia article, all of the sections seem to be fairly equal in length and importance with the exception of the "In philately" section. This section does not seem to contain information that is beneficial in better understanding the Rhim Gazelle and could be considered a little bit off topic. Overall, this article is neutral and is backed by reliable sources, but could benefit by adding information backed by an additional reliable source.