User:CrimsonJF/Phloeodes diabolicus/Xinyuy22 Peer Review

General info
CrimsonJF
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 * User:CrimsonJF/Phloeodes diabolicus
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Phloeodes diabolicus

Lead
The current version of Lead is in a really good balance, having a good amount of summary of the major sections while only keeping concise and not over-detailed information.

Content
The information is relevant and up-to-date. The added contents in the section "Ecological role and biological characteristics" provide interesting and insightful commonalities of Phloeodes diabolicus and other species in the same family, making the entire article much more informative. I never lose focus or get distracted while reading the article.

Tone and Balance
The content added is neutral and non-biased. Rather than the viewpoints, almost all of the paragraphs added try to present the facts. Hence, It does not contain the problem of being underrepresented or overrepresented.

Sources and References
The new content is indeed backed up by reliable published journals and peer-reviewed resources.

Organization
The contents added for the section "shell structure" are well-organized and easy to read.

Images and Media
No new images and media were added.

Overall Impression
Based on the Wikipedia history search and generated comparisons, I was really impressed by Crimson's contributions to the article. This Wikipedia article for Phloeodes diabolicus already has a certain amount of information before her edits, which actually sometimes can makes it harder to find a good direction to further research and write. If I have to give out a suggestion for future improvements, I would say it may be better to rearrange the subtitles/section a little bit -- for instance, dividing the ecological role and biological characteristics information, forming separate sections; And also, the "shell structure" could be counted as "biological characteristics". However, overall, I believe this article already has a decent amount of content.