User:CrimsonKingsCourt/Nicias/MetersNotMiles Peer Review

Lead

The introduction paragraph includes statements about his death in two different areas so it does not flow easily. You may want to consider placing all aspects of his death into one place so it flows easier. Other than that, it is very uniform and does not contain bias and only states facts in a way that looks as if it was written by one person. Beyond that, citations are needed in the introduction as there are currently none at all.

Content

I think that the article itself is up to date and concisely written in an effective way. The information is all relevant to Nicias.

Tone and Balance

The information appears neutral and I did not notice any issues with bias or misinformation. That being said, I may have missed something or misinterpreted something as neutral so double-checking may be helpful.

Sources and References

The base article is missing a lot of citations or is improperly cited (I'm sure you are aware so I will not delve too deeply into it). I think changing the 'Main article' citations or at the very least skimming through them to find where the information is from for proper citations would be helpful. Some sources I found that might help you are as follows:


 * https://www.jstor.org/stable/pdf/637190.pdf?casa_token=GXScpcCVKfcAAAAA:byeJY-JUeYATwwkwXu_-60qYrNMxvkrwG-t4O2DJJPF-d3WKcTR8_ZwV1kDkAFEe3VSVwoPp_W91umbmyo7vdinvNnoRdwTNO9lxyMCzoJYR8p996B0
 * https://www.jstor.org/stable/pdf/422748.pdf?casa_token=URsI27vljd0AAAAA:vYnN4ncSoXnIWsuwbqebSHNC29PuZ6JB2IrdGl2usPNnCgv0VKVtB8K5AGfOPHbMiIAhfw2k5r_MVeJfeO4HkveAZ5TXDqTKhehKs2Uzmd5IzsklkaA

Organization

I think a few sections could be combined with larger ones. For example, the Early Life segment may want to be combined with Death or vice-versa. Having two separate segments on his life and what happened when both sections are so short seems ineffective. You may want to consider putting death before his accomplishments even or completely removing the Early Life section as it adds little context to his behaviour and ideals in his later life.

Images and Media

I noticed that you had changed the image of Nicias to a new one. I'm not sure if it was due to a copyright reason or improper citation but the original image looked a little easier on the eyes and the new one seems to distract from the article. It is not a bad thing to change the image but it is definitely distracting from the text in my opinion.

Overall Impressions

I think your edits thus far have been very productive and make for a much easier read! The only major problems with the base article were the citations (or lack thereof. Good luck with your article!

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