User:Crimson Kai/Imprinting (psychology)/Jalyn547 Peer Review

Peer Review

General info
Crimson Kai
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Crimson%20Kai/Imprinting_%28psychology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Imprinting (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
To get started, I would work on the Lead. A good lead is concise and gives a short description of the main points covered within the topic. The Lead is good so far. The main thing you need is the short description of the main points. I think the way the article is organized is fine. Everything sounds neutral as well. Keep the same neutral tone throughout the article. I also suggest looking more into the duck syndrome and lambic imprinting, those sections have the least amount of information in them.