User:Crimson Kai/Imprinting (psychology)/Kmcmiche Peer Review

General info
Crimson Kai
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Crimson%20Kai/Imprinting_%28psychology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Imprinting (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
There are no contributions in the user's sandbox, and the only edit I can see is the addition of a source (source 6). While the citation is up to date and reliable, it gives little information regarding the sentence before it. The source relates imprinting to their nesting in areas that are similar to those where the were born. I believe adding this information with that citation would be beneficial. The article itself is severely lacking in terms of citations in nearly every paragraph, but it is specifically lacking in the lead paragraph. The limbic imprinting section is lacking in information as a whole. It may be best to focus on adding citations for the information presented and adding more information to the limbic imprinting section. More concise definitions and examples are needed in the limbic imprinting section and the sexual imprinting section.