User:Crimson Kai/Imprinting (psychology)/Nicolemicha Peer Review

General info
Crimson Kai
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Crimson%20Kai/Imprinting_%28psychology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Imprinting (psychology):

Evaluate the drafted changes
I cannot see any changes in the Sandbox Draft, therefore, it is hard to give edits on the lead, tone and balance, content, sources, organization, and images and media. Perhaps by adding the edited work to the sandbox draft would be of help and bolding it so that others can see. Furthermore, by adding the original article's text and then adding in your edited work after in a bold or italic font would help with seeing the information.