User:CrispRadish922/Hybrid rice/Bibliography

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 * grammar has some bumpy spots throughout the article
 * History section
 * it's almost as long as Strengths and drawbacks
 * describes some metrics that seem current and shouldn't be part of "history"
 * has general information that could be moved to the introduction
 * could use a Methods section of some sort
 * first, second, and third generation breeding
 * State of the art section
 * missing citation
 * should probably be merged with History
 * last sentence hints at third-generation mechanism but doesn't actually go anywhere