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ARTICLE OBSERVATION If chosen the article Jose_Luis_Abajo, the biography of a Spanish olympic fencer. There is a complete wikipedia article in Spanish, but when you try to look for the information in english it appears very little information. I have decided to complete the article and translate the Spanish version into an English one. The sources in the spanish article are reliable, so i will maintain the same sources in order to not to change the meaning of the text. the article is very neutral which follow the wikipedia requirements. all the links in the article work, and i will add some more to already existing wikipedia articles.

ARTICLE DRAFT CHANGES José Luis Abajo Gómez, nicknamed Pirri (born 22 June 1978), is a Spanish épée fencer. Abajo won the silver medal in the épée team event at the 2006 World Fencing Championships after losing against France in the final. He accomplished this with his teammates Ignacio Canto, Juan Castañeda and Eduardo Sepulveda Puerto. He won the bronze medal in the Épée competition at the 2008 Summer Olympics in Beijing, China, defeating Hungarian Gábor Boczkó,[1] being this the first Olympic medal won by Spain in fencing, and becoming the Olympic medal number 100 (99 according to the IOC) in the history of Spain, regarding winter and summer Olympic Games. In 2013 he was inducted in the Hall of Fame of the International Fencing Federation.[2]

change expressions: losing to changed for losing against. added sentences to complete the text. sentences appeared in the Spanish version of the article, and where take take of reliable sources.