User:Crmaurik/Derek Walcott/HermioneGranger1997 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Crmaurik, Fegraham, Sydnka, and Nsfrohli


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Crmaurik/Derek Walcott


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: the lead is mostly a summary of the play. As is, it dos not address many of the other sections of the article (e.g. awards, productions, critical reception, etc.). Since later in the article an extensive summary is provided, the summary part of the lead could be cut down to include information about themes, reception, etc.

Content: all of the content is applicable and up to date. The synopsis of Act I, the descriptions of various productions of the play, and the play's critical reception are all well done. The synopsis of Act II still needs to be completed. Maybe consider including a section on major themes or the Walcott's inspiration.

Tone and Balance: the content is neutral and does not attempt to persuade

Sources and References: some of the references (e.g. to pantomime and calypso music) are to other Wikipedia articles. Based on Wikipedia rules, Wikipedia articles should not be used. Try to find other sources that address these topics. There are a variety of sources used and the links work.

Organization: the prose is clear, concise, and easy to follow. The sections make the article easier to read and the titles make sense. Multiple other Wikipedia pages are linked in. However, Derek Walcott's page is linked in twice (once in the lead, once in Critical Reception). The link in critical reception should be removed. The Wikipedia page on St. Lucia should be linked in.

Images and Media: no images are included. If they exist, and if it doesn't violate copyright, maybe consider including an image of one of the productions of the play.

New Articles: make sure to link this page to Derek Walcott's page. The article contains the major sections that are common in other pages on plays.

Overall impression: this article is on track. Make sure to complete the synopsis and remove the references to Wikipedia. Adjust the lead section so it contains less of a synopsis and more information about the other sections of the article.