User:Cronacrab/Community theatre/CathStudies Peer Review

General info
Cronacrab
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Cronacrab/Community theatre
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Community theatre

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Cronacrab, (great username by the way!)

You picked a great topic for an article. I was looking at the original article for "Community Theatre", and it pretty much only contains two shorter paragraphs of information, which I think it great for you, because there is so much room for improvement!

I also noticed in the talk page of the article you asked, "Should this article contain a history section? It seems like a lot of the geographical subsections really would be better sorted into a history section of sorts, like Theatre. Cronacrab" --- and I think that sounds like a really good idea. The way the history is sorted out in the "theatre" page, is very nice and organized, and I think doing something similar to it would make for a great layout.

Maybe you could go into things like the role community theater has in building community cohesion and providing accessible cultural experiences, the key components of what community theater involves, or the challenges and opportunities involved with it. You definitely don't have to talk about any of those things, I was just thinking of some suggestions off the top of my head.

Overall, the current article doesn't really give much detail at about community theater at all, in fact it doesn't even have one picture on the page, so you have a lot of creative room to delve into the areas you think are best (which is a great thing), and I look forward to where you take it.