User:Crossberryy/John Makepeace/Unclebenny 713 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Crossberryy


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Crossberryy/John Makepeace (page doesn't exist)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * John Makepeace

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Article hasn't been started, so not much to say except to add further information on the artist and his works. The lead is the only thing on the article so there is plenty to potentially add about the artist's personal life and achievements. Pictures are also necessary. There are plenty of references available on the page so start with those and begin drafting on your sandbox.