User:Crowseye22/Affirmative Action in Brazil/Oakland721 Peer Review

The article as organized and the content was relevant to the subject. I would like to see more information on the current status regarding Affirmative action and how it has improved the education of minorities. There were a few grammatical errors but not a significant amount. Your sources are valid and all links work. This article will be impactful to its readers.

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