User:Croxrys/Media bias in the United States/Annafilippovaa Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Croxrys


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Croxrys/Media_bias_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Media bias in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the suggested edits are great! I like how you specifically pinpointed details (copying and pasting the quotes) and explaining how they were either not current or just simply not relevant anymore. I especially believe the demographic polling section of the article should be improved, like you mentioned because the most recent elections (2020 and 2022 midterms) have definitely skewed data just based on polarization and a variety of other events. The only thing is I noticed you linked a book as one of your sources and I'm unsure if that is super accessible for Wikipedia but I could also be wrong I think maybe just double check on the guidelines for that, because when I pressed the link I think I was hit with a paywall or needed some sort of access. The other source you linked though is great and seems very applicable towards your article and towards correcting the outdated information. Also, I am unsure if you necessarily need the in text citations like the (Brenan) unless it's a direct quote because you are already linking the article, but that is just nitpicky. You might need to add a couple more sources to your overall article just so that you hit the 3 sources qualification once the deadline hits, but you still have loads of time to figure that out too. All in all though I like the specificity of your suggested edits and I think they are going to improve the accuracy of the article!

Carolina: Thank you for your feedback! I'll add another source to meet the qualification, and I'll get rid of the in text citations. The book is accessible online through library databases but I'll plan for the rest to be more accessible.