User:Croxrys/Media bias in the United States/Rileylaub Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Croxrys


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Croxrys/Media_bias_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Media bias in the United States

Evaluate the drafted change
Followed along with overall impressions questions above:

First, I like the sections you are making adjustments to. I think the gender section lacks tremendous amounts of information and your intentions with the article is well justified. I also liked your inclusion of adding more recent info and other sources in the Demographic polling section. I think you trying to improve the quality of these sections makes the article more complete.

I think your areas of strength are the locations of where you choose to include information and the idea that you are trying to add more recent sources to the article. I think everything you are choosing to add is justified and warranted, and you are not wasting your time with unnecessary edits.

I think you can get a couple more sources, especially because everyone needed to add 3 sources. I only saw two sources in the sandbox draft, so you should definitely include more. I also think the accusations between competitors section could use more information and examples as well, its pretty bare right now.