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Article Evaluation
Article Choice: History of Rutgers

General Comments: Evaluation of Sources: Talk Page: How does this differ from class discussions: Neutrality:
 * Grammar issue in the first sentence
 * Grammar issue in 2nd paragraph: “it is now a secular institution and became New Jersey's leading state university of New Jersey:”
 * Early history and conception paragraph seems out of place and disconnected
 * Little mention of potential involvement of the students and the war, just the change in class location
 * No information past 2012
 * No information from the findings of Scarlet and Black
 * Most of the sources come from Rutgers related sources -- could be bias
 * Certain website links in the references do not work
 * 2nd link from the Daily Targum does not work
 * Uses primarily two sources (3 and 4) at the end of large paraphrased information
 * Wanting to add new sections like athletics, controversies, venues, and Ivy League invitation
 * An attempt to add more sources that did not make it to the completed page
 * No mention of slavery in the creation of the university
 * Little contextualization in the overall history of New Jersey
 * The overall flow of the article feels neutral and not strongly biased. However, almost all the sources come directly from Rutgers, which does not necessarily mean that they are biased, but that could be the case. However, it is impossible to know as a majority of the citation links do not function.