User:Crutchfieldc/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Ferrari 599

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article about the Ferrari 599 because I love cars, specifically Ferrari, and I am relatively knowledgeable about them.

Evaluate the article
This is a very informative and detailed article about one of my favorite vehicles of all time: the attention to detail displayed in this article is impressive. Here are some suggestions I have thought of:


 * The lead paragraph is clear and presents essential information well; it would benefit if the initial image of the 599 had a caption explaining which year and variant it is, along with color.
 * It might make sense to include 599 GTO and 599 HGTE under the “also called” section in the Overview section, as this is an article regarding the 599 as a whole, not just the GTB Fiorano.
 * Under “Related” in the “Overview” section of the article, what is the distinction for a model to be considered related? It is nice to list some associated models, but would it make sense to include the predecessor and successor in the “Related” section?
 * It is apparent there was a meticulous amount of detail that went into creating the “Special Variants” section of the Article, and as interesting as the information might be, as I read the article, it became overwhelming when I reached the “599 GTZ Nibbio Zagato” section, especially in the table. I like how the other special variants were presented more concisely. I think this section has been focused on too much and might benefit from having a separate article about the 599 GTZ Nibbio Zagato linked to a shortened section in the 599 article.
 * There are many images spread throughout the different variants: 599 GTO, 599XX, and 599 GTB. It would be beneficial to add a section that lays out pictures of the various colors that the 599 was offered in.
 * In the “Interior” section, I would suggest adding a few images of different interior options.
 * I would suggest adding an image of the F12 in the “Successor” section, and I would also recommend adding a “Predecessor” section for the 575M Maranello.

Overall, it is obvious that this article has been meticulously crafted and polished by many passionate 599 enthusiasts. I hope my suggestions are useful for future edits.