User:Cryoung4/Thomas Dent (writer)/Ataylor41 Peer Review

General info
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 * Whose work are you reviewing? Cryoung4


 * Link to draft you're reviewing https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Thomas_Dent_%28writer%29&diff=1187382649&oldid=1177412445:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Thomas Dent (writer):

Evaluate the drafted changes
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- Adding the infobox is very helpful and I know it takes a lot of time to create so I believe that is a really great contribution you made

- I see that you edited the early life and education section and the information you included will be very helpful with getting to know more about the background of Thomas Dent

-I like that you added a lot of information about his college life and that is definitely very crucial information for someone to obtain when learning about a writer.

-The links that you have included within your paragraphs are definitely helpful and make it a lot easier to access another wikipedia page

- Maybe another helpful section you could include is one about all the different book/novels he has written and a little summary about all of them

- I also see that you have a New York section in your sandbox. I think it could be a good addition to the article in the author spent a significant amount of time in New York and was a significant place to him.