User:Cryssipoo/Feminist movements and ideologies/Nataliiemacias Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cryssipoo’s Article on Feminist movements


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Cryssipoo/Feminist movements and ideologies


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I believe the author does a well described job of being able to describe the definition and actions that happens during such feminist movements. It is not talked about what specific feminist movements have taken place but more so the fact that feminist movements are a place where protestors protest more female rights and that ranges from equal pay, equal rights, and whatever else that may entail. I think the author can expand more on her topic since it is a broad topic. You have room to talk about multiple things and as well as have certain sections where you can talk about examples.