User:Crzrzc/Francisco Cárdenas Martínez/H6b96bu7 Peer Review

The lead may need more biographical information if available, such as where he was born, his age and his upbringing and family life. A more in depth introductory sentence and background information would be useful to the page. A short summary of what is to come in the following sections could also improve this page so we know more background.

The content itself is relevant to the topic but could be further detailed, such as the books section which just needs a little tweaking in where the reference is and more specifics on the other artists mentioned in the book and their relevance to the topic. The content is neutral and does a great job of having no bias. I would also love to know other works by this artist and if there are more murals and pieces than the main topic, "Los Lobos de Loyola statues".

The content is well written and has reference that seem to match to the information available with a variation of different sources and authors, could use more connection to the writing in terms of relevance but overall good. I would love to see photos and media included of the art and possible the artist if possible. I do not see a list of sources or references, although there are links to other wikipedia mages and sources that are relevant and useful to the text.

Overall needs improvement in detail but is an incredible start!

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Francisco Cárdenas Martínez


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 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Crzrzc/Francisco_C%C3%A1rdenas_Mart%C3%ADnez?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
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