User:Csanherz/Body dysmorphic disorder/Bedrum00 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Csanherz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Csanherz/Body dysmorphic disorder
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Body dysmorphic disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Csanherz! I like everything that you have added into your article! I would suggest reviewing some of the sentences to see if you could break them up to avoid large, clunky sounding sentences. The large portion you added in the "Diagnosis" section fits well in that part but, it is not very clear and could use some reviewing. I am not sure that some of the parentheses are necessary but the information is interesting! Overall, good job!