User:Csanherz/Body dysmorphic disorder/Chalktalk1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Csanherz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Csanherz/Body dysmorphic disorder


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Body dysmorphic disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

For your proposal under the Self Improvement section; I think that you clearly expounded on the section with relevant information. It is well worded, easy to understand, and is a positive contribution to the section.

Regarding your proposed contribution to the Signs and Symptoms section; I would suggest instead of using "go to the extreme" maybe say something like "people who suffer from BDD have extreme views and/or distorted perceptions". Your second proposal under this section is well worded and pertinent information and has a relevant location to the information.

Regarding your proposed contribution to the Diagnosis and History sections: I think all of your proposals in these sections are beneficial, well worded, and well placed. I would not recommend any changes.

I agree that moving the History section to the top would improve the article.

Great Job!katChalktalk1 (talk) 01:51, 1 March 2021 (UTC)