User:Csanherz/Body dysmorphic disorder/Eternalruler Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Csanherz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing?
 * User:Csanherz/Body dysmorphic disorder
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Body dysmorphic disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really think the changes included will improve the overall quality of the article. I was surprised that some of the information was not included previously. The lead section could be expounded upon. I think that it would possibly be a good idea to mention your addition about the comorbidities and classification as a somatoform disorder in this section. Improving the original articles tone (it reads informal to me) would be a huge improvement to the overall.

The suggested change under "Self-Improvement" regarding cosmetic surgery is a good addition to the article and makes for a more complete view of possible consequences of the disorder. This addition could be expounded upon so that the gets a fuller sense of of the dangers.