User:Csanherz/Body dysmorphic disorder/Will590 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Csanherz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Csanherz/Body dysmorphic disorder


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Body dysmorphic disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
The first addition is really good in content, but you did mistype the first abbreviation as BBD. The addition to Self-Improvement might be better served be splitting the topic into a little more detail and mention more details about both the surgical and psychiatry points of view. There is also a lot of room for more addition to that same heading since people suffering from BDD can also abuse more routine activities to do with body image. The second group of additions seems good, but i would consider splitting men and women and possibly go into a little more detail about each one. I really liked your addition to diagnosis, but I am curious why the relationship between BDD and eating disorders is not mentioned anywhere. As a least point to make I agree with the note that someone left about moving history to the top of the page, it makes more sense for history to come first since it provides background for the rest of the sections.