User:Cstanton19/Women photographers/Sidney Gordon Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cstanton19


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Cstanton19/Women photographers


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Women photographers

Evaluate the drafted changes
I took a look at the existing article as well as your revisions and was impressed with the diversity of the present information. The article includes a wide range of styles of photography that have evolved over time. It even includes individual categories for lesbian and African-American artist which was great to see. From looking at your sandbox I think it would be interesting to expand on the male dominance and historical misogyny in the industry. Some more contemporary updates of artists specifically those who take a feminist stance with their subjectivity could also be good additions (which you seem to already have started thinking about). So far the main article is written in a very neutral tone with a light on marginalized women which is great. I am interested to see your further contributions considering the article is already fairly well developed.

** Draft seems still rough an incomplete so hard to answer above** Sidney Gordon (talk) 04:45, 16 March 2021 (UTC)