User:Csteel3777/Child health and nutrition in Africa/Laguan0206 Peer Review

General info
Csteel3777
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Undernutrition in children
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Undernutrition in children:

Evaluate the drafted changes
The new text has been updated to expand on existing information specific to growth inhibitors (ie. age and gender) and how inhibitors reflect proof of malnutrition. Additionally, she also expanded on the consequences of malnutrition in children, including diseases and other health complications. I believe this is important information in understanding the severity of malnutrition and extremely relevant to the topic. I think it would have been beneficial and helpful to include details on the consequences of girls vs boys. I believe a sentence or two was deleted in relation to this. Early in the text, you describe inhibitors that contribute to malnutrition, and I would leave to see how you can expand on this with including a discussion on gender.

Overall, the text is neutral and does not shift towards any bias. The writing is also short and simple to understand with no ambiguity. There are no spelling errors. The material is also up to date. The source added covers an in depth information on the topic.

Good job overall