User:Csteel3777/Undernutrition in children/Alisha2003 Peer Review

General info
Csteel3777
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Undernutrition in Children draft
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Undernutrition in Children

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The addition in the "Measures" section provides some necessary specificity for the information that was already included previously in this section. I really like how you built on the information that was already in the section and added information from your sources to enhance what the article was trying to say.

The additions added to "Effects Later in Life" are critical information to explore and adds more depth to the article. However, I do think the wordage could be clearer and that more specificity is needed from your sources. The source used for this additional text provides nuanced and in depth information on the topic; it can be used more here. To improve the readability, you could consider making your additions another paragraph to emphasize your point more.

Overall, the sources chosen for each addition are reliable peer reviewed sources that provide diverse information. They are also fairly recent and therefore good to use to update the wiki article. I think the additions help to strengthen and provide more depth to the article