User:Ctom1999/Schizoaffective disorder/Pbary psych Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ctom1999


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Schizoaffective disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall your edits look very good! I noticed that the article has a very long lead section and overall it has dense paragraphs with a lot of information. I think you should continue to condense information and break it up so the the article is easier to read. I also think you can expand on the two different types as there is only one sentence for each.

Keep up the good work!