User:Ctom1999/Schizoaffective disorder/Thatbaddie205 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ctom1999


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ctom1999/Schizoaffective_disorder?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Schizoaffective disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hey Cam!

I see that you have struck out a lot of information from the original article. I think that the parts about the mood disorders should stay, since it is relevant to schizoaffective disorder. The part where you wrote " Health care providers stress the importance of assessing for co-occurring substance" , I would suggest possibly taking out the part the health care providers stress. I totally understand that you are emphasizing the importance of assessing substance disorders, but it is not quiet a neutral claim. I think that you did an amazing job of incorporating relevant information. The information you added fit perfectly with the original article. It almost sounds like you wrote the original article yourself since it blended in so well! I like that you added that there were three types of schizoaffective disorders and you were able to highly support your claims with good references.