User:CtopherL/Southern California Steelhead DPS/Galirin15 Peer Review

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CtopherL
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Your introductory sentence is clear and concise along with most of your work I would only suggest adding another sentence or two about the history of the Steelhead before the second sentence where you mention the dwindling numbers seen today.

Towards the end of your paragraph you mentioned that many concrete dams and gutters would confuse the fish, it would benefit your article if you provided specific examples of that.