User:Cube Wang/Adobe/Mengyurui Peer Review

Peer review
I'm reviewing Cube Wang's article


 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Adobe

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * I think I really don't see the lead. I couldn't find it.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * The content added is relevant to the topic, but I'm not sure if it's up to date, and there's nothing missing or not belonging to it.