User:Cullen328/sandbox/Chackler

Hello. Wikipedia articles must be written from the neutral point of view, containing no promotional language whatsoever in Wikipedia's voice. Your draft article is full of just that kind of promotional language, often called "puffery" here. All of this type of language must be removed from the draft. Any praise or positive evaluations must be attributed to a reliable, independent source. This is not negotiable.

Examples include, "several career titles under his belt", "launching the careers of several legendary artists", "one of rap/hip-hop music’s ground-breakers", "Grammy-winning rock legend", "life-long following", "resumes that are miles long; and both of them are pioneers in their field", "incredible success", "vast knowledge, education, and experience", "natural abilities and industry knowledge", " career spans numerous decades, genres, and mediums", "unprecedented success", "did not rest on his laurels with his past successes", "Always at the forefront of new trends in music", "A music visionary who always stayed ahead of trends", "in a move that was a surprise to the industry", "love for music and nose for talent, has allowed him to remain a household name in the industry", "extensive ear for music and talent provided the natural progression to creating", and on and on and on. Every single trace of this overtly promotional language needs to be excised from the draft, and it all needs to be rewritten in a scrupulously neutral style. In addition, every substantive claim of importance needs to be referenced to reliable, independent sources, or removed.