User:Cunning8/Communication physics/CoulsonT Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I am reviewing my classmates additions to an article. Their username is Cunning8.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Cunning8/Communication physics
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Communication_physics&oldid=1024967578
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Communication_physics&oldid=1024967578

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead section has much more substance to it and concisely provides a slightly more detailed introduction to the subject. Small edit should be made in the paragraph under Applications. "..... or in the way of how people communicate." instead of "....or the way of how people communicate.".

The additions were well written and the sources are excellent.