User:Curiouscat21/Ayo Akingbade/Cosmickslop Peer Review

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Curiouscat21
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 * https://w.wiki/7n3h
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Evaluate the drafted changes
This draft looks really good. The lead might be a bit short, but it can be very hard to make longer if there aren't many adequate sources on the filmmaker. There are a few points that might benefit from citations throughout the article, which I'll copy and paste below. I am also not sure if the reference column is necessary in the Awards and Nominations table. If the reference and citation is needed, it could maybe be put elsewhere just to make the table look a bit cleaner. These tiny details aside, I think this is a great article draft.

Might need citations:

"Her short films explore the mundanity of urban life in full swing in London's inner-city boroughs and industrial life in her hometown in Nigeria."

"Akingbade graduated with the intent to build a career in the film industry, yet often speaks about her not being taken seriously as a Black woman in the white-dominated field."