User:Curti485/Max Caulfield/MadisonFerguson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Curti485


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Curti485/Max_Caulfield?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like this article so far! I think it is very educational and un-biased. Though maybe think about breaking up the "life is strange" section in appearances into smaller paragraphs or maybe two sections, because it is very long. Overall I think you all have worked really hard on this and the work payed off, because it looks really great! Your sources also look good.

- Madison