User:Cvmelcher/Linda Threadgill/Skim2000 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cvmelcher


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Cvmelcher/Linda Threadgill


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Linda Threadgill

Evaluate the drafted changes
This person has two references and added new content. The content remains neutral and is relevant to the topic. It is also easily understood. However, make sure that the section called Technique has a proper header so that it creates visual hierarchy. Another issue is that the second reference doesn't match up to the information that is listed in the sandbox draft. Try to pinpoint the exact source