User:Cvredenburg01/Gisela, Abbess of Chelles/Ivonrr08 Peer Review

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Cvredenburg01 - Claire Vredenburg


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 * Gisela, Abbess of Chelles

Evaluate the drafted changes
In the unrevised article, you get the general information of who Gisela was such as their birth and estimate death. In addition, it has references that would support the existing pages. What Clair has added to the page is dividing the information from the section life into life and Abbess which is important to note. The addition to categories was one of the biggest changes to happen on the page. The categories aid the readers to know more of what she was part of if the reader does not know. My only advice if possible, to add more information on what she did specifically as an abbess and how she rebuilt up some churches or libraries.