User:Cwdascher15/Michael Martin Hammer/Sdavis2023 Peer Review

General info
Cwdascher15
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Cwdascher15/Michael Martin Hammer
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Michael Martin Hammer

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * In the Lead paragraph it looks like a portion of the article is bold like a subheading rather than paragraph like the rest of the paragraph.
 * I noticed on the article that it has Early Life and Education thought it only stated information about his education, maybe add information about his early life if you are able to find information. I would maybe look at the wording on the last sentence under Education. I would maybe include that Hammer received his Masters and Phd at MIT also.
 * On the published Wikipedia page it has Business Process Re-engineering and Hammer and Company under Legacy rather than Career.
 * I noticed some grammatical errors such as spelling in the section Business Process Re-engineering.
 * Your references and links look good.
 * Looks good and I noticed you have already uploaded your changes into Wikipedia