User:Cxalexander2

About Me
I'm currently a student learning about Business at my local Community college in order to obtain my Associates Degree. I am a former tennis player and Track and field runner. I love to read books that are typically fiction, mostly realistic fiction and young adults. One of my personal favorite authors is Rick Riordan. I read his books as a child and grew up with them, I strongly believe his books are apart of my growth. A more current author I am reading is Alex Sanchez who write book more suitable for myself.

My Wikipedia Activities
I am of Filipino American descent and am looking forward to using my knowledge to fill informational gaps that could be within pages here of Filipino figures. I watch many South East Asian shows which gives me background on information that might not be recorded properly or at all on Wikipedia. Other than shows I am also active in other sides of entertainment from South East Asia including- music, movies, apps and variety shows.

Article Evaluation
Having grown up with the popular korean genre Kpop, I have listened to many groups. From older groups to newer ones I have followed them for over a decade, it wasn’t until 2 years ago I was finally able to see a live concert, which was of a smaller group, A.C.E. I visited the A.C.E. article on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: it’s lack of structure, it’s incomplete information, and inappropriate citations.

Lack of Structure
Compared to many articles on Wikipedia, especially other Korean groups, A.C.E.’s articles lack simple structure. Information is clumped together in awkward places and lacks a proper foundation. Under their pre-debut section; the information is unorganized, the flow is abrupt, and hard to follow. Rather than just being listed they are instead written one after another without proper sectioning. Some of these listings also carry a biased tone.

Incomplete Information
The information is accurate and correct, but is not in full. Some key information that it is missing would include their full name, birthdays, and ages. Under their personal information the only listed is their stage names and position within the group. After viewing other sources I see that they follow the information listed on the official website. Other source’s still offer their full information which I think could benefit the content of the article immensely.

Inappropriate Citations
At first look the article seems to be well cited, with a full amount of references. Citations play a major part in writing articles, but when you cite a lyrics website for the article the credibility of the article diminishes. Other citations lead to dead websites which should be either updated or taken out completely as they now no longer cite information from the website.

Summary
The article itself is on the right track to be a great article, in its current state however it is poorly executed. Simple adjustments to the organization of the content can allow for an easier read, where a natural flow can form. Proper information in the second section, “Members,” is also needed. Overall, the article still holds correct information, it just requires some fixes here and there.