User:CyberKravMaga/Computer security incident management/Aep69436 Peer Review

General info
CyberKravMaga
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CyberKravMaga/Computer_security_incident_management?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Computer security incident management

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, the draft is formatted in a very neutral perspective with minor spelling and grammar errors throughout. The format allows for readers to easily follow and understand what is being said and talked about with little to no confusion at any time of what is being discussed at that moment. The author breaks down from the start the different frameworks that are followed for computer security incident management in the beginning and then further explains what each framework is by breaking them into their own sections. The lead of the article, although makes sense, could be more concise. For example, it could be worded something like "Computer security incident management, encompasses all phases of the cybersecurity program from preparing for to implementing changes resulting from cybersecurity incidents." Although that is just one sentence of the authors lead, it allows for a more concise version of what the author wrote achieving the same meaning and purpose. Throughout the article, the author referenced several relevant and accurate resources to support the concepts in which they were trying to explain and cover. The author ensured the content being referenced was up to date and relevant, and ensured references were added throughout the article where needed. Comparatively to the published versioning of the article, the information that is included in the sandbox draft will significantly enhance the material that is already published. This will allow readers to develop a better and more comprehensive understanding of what computer security incident management by including what the frameworks are and what they cover.